By hwbot standards that result is OK and will recieve points, there is the screen shot plus a valid published ORB link.
As far as the competition goes (and I'm not sure who is judging entries) the rules specify MSI approved drivers. I'm not sure what they mean by that...maybe they mean FM approved drivers and if so, I think there may be grounds to review that submission. There is no rule about showing Coretemp in the screen shot, not sure where you got that idea. As with all competitions, each entry will need to be validated, only then can the winners be declared..